017: Broken Dolls, Part 4

017: Broken Dolls, Part 4

There’s a reason they call it the graveyard shift, Sean.


Story Notes: In case you were wondering, yes, the dolls are actually talking. In the last panel, Sean is asking the girl from panel 3 (not the doll) who she is.

Art Notes: This page took forever to draw. Lots of stuff to draw, my skills evaporate every time I get to a page that I consider fairly important, and there were several cases of hands to be drawn here (which are the most frustrating thing in the world to draw).

I have decided that when I become King of the World, everybody’s hands will be replaced by soft mittens. Problem solved.

Incidentally, the button eyes were NOT inspired by Coraline. I loved the movie, but that’s not where I got it. I have been pondering button-eyed girls for several years.

The hand in panels 4 and 6 belong to the girl in panel 3. She is playing with the dolls.

Note in hindsight: I think that this page was rather too on-the-nose in depicting the story behind these characters.  I don’t regret making it about something so serious, but it could probably stand more subtlety.  The next page, on the other hand, might be too subtle a response…

↓ Transcript
Panel 1
Sean: It CAN'T be
Girl's voice: Sob

Panel 2
Sean: Lydia...?

Panel 3
Lydia's voice: Help ... please
Sean: Lydia ... honey ... is that you?

Panel 4
Sean Doll: Do you LOVE Daddy, sweetheart? Let's play OUR game...
Lydia Doll: No, please ... I don't like this game.

Panel 5
No text

Panel 6
Sean Doll: Remember, Lydia, this is our secret...

Panel 7
Lydia Doll (praying): Dear God, I want to die and go to heaven. Signed, Lydia.
Sean: Who ARE you?

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Discussion (2)¬

  1. Jack Talon says:

    What… the hell? XD

  2. Dyne says:

    So, like I’ve said, not a comedy series…